Friday, 28 August 2015

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 - Twilight Fanfiction


28 August 2015
 
 

Two Blue Lines by Payton79

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-term boyfriend.  Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans.  Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl.  Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy.  What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life?  What if they can't even remember how they came to be?
 
 

My Review:   3 out of 5

This was a nice family/romance story more a family story than a romance.  It follows Bella and Edward's story of how they handle life when, after a one night stand, she becomes pregnant.  I liked the bad Carlisle angle, it was well written.
There was a lot of, will this be the chapter that one of them finally makes a move, only to get to the end and still no progress, with the characters not moving out of the friends category and heating up until 4 chapters from the end.
 


Would I read the next in the series or another story by this Author? 

 Yes.


Would I recommend someone else to read this story?

Yes, if you are looking for a light romance family story
 
 
 
 
  

 

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